January Writing Contest - Grape's Entry

[Opal]

It was a snowy day atop Mt. Cornet. The young vulpix, Emily, lost her way and ended up there while looking for her family. She got separated from them during the climb. She decided to move on and find someone. The heavy snowfall almost completely covered her, as she walked through the storm to find shelter. “brrrrrrr”. Emily’s teeth chattered as she shook a few inches of snow off her back. In the distance, she could see a couple pokemon near a giant, snow-covered rock. They seemed to be glowing. She picked up her pace and ran as fast as she could. She finally reached the boulder. It was a glaceon family, and some of their children were evolving. She overheard two mothers talking. “I love the annual evolution ceremony”. One said. Emily said “it does look pretty”, forgetting that she wasn’t in the conversation. The glaceon turned and spotted her. “Get in line, hurry or you’ll miss it!” It was obvious that they thought she was a little eevee. They nudged her toward the rock. Nothing happened. No glow, no evolution. The eldest glaceon, who seemed to be the clan’s leader, patted her on the back. “There’s always next year, dear.” He said. After the ceremony, they all went back to a cave. This must be their home, Emily thought. For that night, she slept with the little eevees. In the middle of the night, she was awoken. Everyone was gathered around the eggs. They were hatching! The cutest baby eevee popped out of its egg, and crawled to its mother. Soon after, the rest of them did the same thing. After a few days of living there, Emily began to feel like she was one of them. She hunted with them, share d meals with them, and other things families do together. Life was luxurious, but Emily still missed her family. That night, two ninetales and several vulpixes appeared at the cave entrance. they said they followed my footprints and it led them there. They came to take Emily home. Suddenly, Emily's memory bolted and she remembered everything. she said farewell to her new friends and began the walk home wither real family, although she felt like she belonged with the glaceon clan.

((Sorted the new thread problem. On another note not accepted, only three characters max. Edit or post a reply - Opal))

[grape]

kk. But what do you mean not excepted?

[Arctic]

Not accepted; means your entry is not valid and hasn't been considered contest material yet. You have to rework it by either editing or posting a reply containing the edited result. Obey the contest rules and use no more than three characters.

[grape]

Oh! kk

[grape]

This Better?

It was a snowy day atop Mt. Cornet. The young vulpix, Emily, lost her way and ended up there while looking for her family. She got separated from them during the climb. She decided to move on and find someone. The heavy snowfall almost completely covered her, as she walked through the storm to find shelter. “brrrrrrr”. Emily’s teeth chattered as she shook a few inches of snow off her back. In the distance, she could see a couple pokemon near a giant, snow-covered rock. One of them seemed to be glowing. She picked up her pace and ran as fast as she could. She finally reached the boulder. It was a glaceon family, and some One of their children was evolving. She overheard the mother congratulating her daughter. “You finally did it!”. she said said. Emily said “Wow. How'd you do that?”, forgetting that she wasn’t in the conversation. The glaceon turned and spotted her. “We finally found you!” It was obvious that they thought she was a her lost decendant. They nudged her toward the rock. Nothing happened. No glow, no evolution. “There’s always next year, dear.” She said. After that, they all went back to a cave. This must be their home, Emily thought. For that night, she slept alone. In the middle of the night, she was awoken. The two Glaceon nudged her awake. They then went out to hunt. After a few days of living there, Emily began to feel like she was one of them. She hunted with them, share d meals with them, and other things families do together. Life was luxurious, but Emily still missed her family. A few weeks later, One of the glaceon told her: "News was brought here that you're not an eevee. You're a vulpix! But i only know this because we found some other ninetales this morning. She was looking for you, but she died. But you can live with us." Emily understood, and she lived with the glaceon.

[Opal]

Yeah, it's okay now.